On a hot sunny day my family went to the warehouse to get our stuff that we need from here. My mum gave us money to buy something for us. When we got out me and my sisters and auntie started to walk back to the car. We went because it was so boring at home,and had nothing to do. We went because it was nearly Easter. We got in the car and drove off back home.We got home and then my mum said get the rappers and the sellotape and take the present over to nana house. We went inside to have a nap after that we had to go do some shopping,it took us 1 hour. It was the morning i woke up and went to eat weekbix for breakfast. In the afternoon we went in the garge and there was our presents from yesterday. I was so happy because it was right there. My sisters was happy too.
WALHT write an interesting recount. I am trying to add speech. I found it hard because i could't remember the words that was in my head. Next time i want to remember to add different beginning
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